Rumpus

I am going to tell you a story about what began, thus .,,,,
our underused garage became a room for rumpus.
Little did we anticipate the rowdiness it would encompass,
when rowdy young children began to rumpus plus plus!
Discuss the matter further we must.

This week Kim challenged we poets to craft a quadrille around the word “rumpus”. This is an almost true story. Only the children have changed. https://dversepoets.com/2025/08/25/quadrille-230-lets-kick-up-a-rumpus/

12 thoughts on “Rumpus

  1. I enjoyed your almost true story, Sean, especially the rhymes. These lines made me smile:

    ‘Little did we anticipate the rowdiness it would encompass,when rowdy young children began to rumpus plus plus!’

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  2. Sean, I like the playful rhythm in this one—it feels like you’re letting the word “rumpus” have its own romp. The way you lean into “rumpus plus plus” makes it sound like the kids themselves are piling on the fun.

    ~David

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