River #04

this river rolls alluringly 
deep and slow
so full and powerful I cry
take me
take me river before I should die
take me dear river to wherever you go
I’ll ride you there fast I’ll ride you there slow
and river my river I’ll love you always
I’ll drift on and caress you the rest of my days
I’ll wind through your meanders
and sing with your songs
we’ll seed fertile plains and fill billabongs
river my lover take me I’m yours
through all seasons we'll wander
I’ll never ship oars

Lisa prompted we poets with pilgrimage, wandering or walkabout for the dVerse challenge this week. I have recently been wandering, on walkabout, writing about rivers, and so came to #04.

9 thoughts on “River #04

  1. I live next to a dyke on the Norfolk Broads, so your poem resonates with me Sean. I especially enjoyed these lines:

    ‘I’ll wind through your meanders
    and sing with your songs
    we’ll seed fertile plains and fill billabongs’.

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  2. Sean, it isn’t something I’ve ever contemplated before, but your poem makes me wonder if the river reciprocates our love? If you believe that the planet is one living organism, it stands to reason that it does <3 Much appreciate reading your homage to your beloved.

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    • I definitely think everything on Earth is an interdependent part of the one entity, our planet. Without conscious care that interdendence will fail. Humans are the only beings on the planet capable of a broad and responsible consciousness. We are the only creatures that can love our planet. In return our planet enables us to love ourselves and thereby to continue to exist.

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