The people are raining in bits and blobs the rain is red bled tears and sobs the people are flying up through the sky arcing like rag dolls to heights very high the thunder is frightening the lightning is death the people are dying taking last breaths fleshy lumps are dropping back to their berth with fractured bones falling to rattle the earth the children are worst as their bodies burst with each new detonation another curse as the soldiers wade through the carnage they create claiming it’s orders no difference can they make instructions come from those sitting above but the executioners fit in with them hand in glove while mothers cry and fathers weep some bodies may heal but other scars run deep and the harm ensures an eye for an eye more and more people will rain from the sky
Melissa’s dVerse prompt for we poets today references the surrealism of Rene Magritte. I chose the painting Golconda (1953) of raining men to address the terrible wars around the globe and our repeated failure to learn the lessons of history.
I like your idea; the raining of people, people that flew too high and who are now controlled by gravity alone.
Thanks for peeking in on my write, this one was fun writing, wasn’t it. Exercise the old brain.
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Your poem describes the terrible wars that are currently taking place with chilling accuracy. As you say ”the scars will run deep’.
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War has definitely been a constant throughout history!
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we waste our most precious resources—ourselves.
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We learn no lessons and till then it will be raining not just men but women and kids too. A very apt write for the times we live in.
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